The only way you are going to persuade someone to support your organization is by effectively illustrating how your programs and services solve a problem. That's hard to do in just one page, which is why two-page fundraising letters typically get a better response. Remember, your letter to prospective donors will be different from what you would send to those who have donated in the past.
Instructions
1. Open your letter with a salutation such as "Dear Friend" or "Dear Community Member" unless, of course, you are able to personalize each letter with the prospect's name.
2. Introduce the prospect to the problem that your organization helps solve in the first paragraph. For example, "More than 200,000 families in our community are food insecure, meaning they do not know where their next meal is going to come from." Provide further detail of this problem in another sentence or two.
3. Tell the prospect, in the second paragraph, about your organization's role in providing for the need you just described. For example, "Thankfully, AAA Food Bank exists; a non-profit organization that has been providing emergency food assistance to hungry families in our community for more than 20 years." Provide further details of your organization's work in another sentence or two.
4. Tell the prospect, in the third paragraph, about the ongoing challenges your organization faces in raising the necessary resources. For example, "Though we are the largest provider of emergency food assistance in our community, the need still far exceeds our resources." Again, provide further detail of the challenge in another sentence or two.
5. Recognize the prospect as the ideal person to help, in the fourth paragraph. For example, "You are among a select group of generous, compassionate community members who have an opportunity to help. Will you please send a gift to AAA Food Bank today?"
6. Write a subhead -- a short, one-line statement bolded and centered in the middle of the page -- such as "Struggling Families In Our Community Need Your Help."
7. Quantify the need among the recipients of your services by introducing a bulleted list of three to five facts or statistics that illustrate the problem. Close the page with another appeal for the prospect's help.
8. Write another subhead to start Page 2 of your letter, such as "Your Gift Helps a Family Like the Smiths."
9. Introduce your prospect to one of the recipients of your services, like a particular family. Tell their story from beginning to end -- what they needed and how your organization helped. Ideally, you should be able to tell this story in four to six paragraphs. If you do not have enough information on any one recipient of services to fill four to six paragraphs, share more than one story.
10. Write another subhead, this time asking the prospect to act immediately. For example, "Hungry Families Cannot Wait For Help."
11. Ask the prospect to send a gift of support with the enclosed reply card today, telling her about all the programs and services that her gift will support. You may list them in bulleted or paragraph form.
12. Quantify the impact of the prospect's gift. For example, "Your gift of just $25 will provide enough food for 100 meals. That means $50 provides enough food for 200 meals and $100 provides enough food for 400 meals."
13. Summarize your letter in the P.S. as it may actually be the first thing your prospect reads. This should reiterate the problem, briefly, tell how the prospect can help and emphasize the urgency.
